Saturday, March 18, 2017

Falling In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ever seen a girl and your heartbeat skip?
Want to say Hi! and you shiver like you're on a pyramid tip?
Did her voice make you start
Or her gaze felt like dart?
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Michael Adeosun
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Rajnish Manga 21 May 2017

This is indeed a beautiful poem of love. It has questions devised from various angles. Thanks a lot. Did you feel high / You felt like touching the sky? Did you feel a great shock / When your boat did hit the rock?

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Chinedu Dike 19 March 2017

Brave utterances set aside for honest contemplation. Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Michael.

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