Thursday, July 1, 2010

Falling In Love Comments

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I dont know what to do,
Im falling in love,
But how do you feel?
When push comes to shove?
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Kieran J1996
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Rachel Brewer 07 July 2010

This is really nice, has a good flow to it. well done, keep writing! check out any of my poems if u have a minute! thanks xxxx

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Young love.. can be so confusing at times. You portrayed this well in your poem! Good one; D

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ellie carpenter 01 July 2010

love the flow of this poem! love the poem its self keep writing and ill keep reading love it love ya xoxoxo ellie

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