Saturday, July 31, 2010

Falling In And Out Of Love Comments

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I leave my wife every day
A kiss on her lips as she sleeps
A long, focused gaze upon her face
She is alone to take care of our children
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Rodrigo Pahati
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Crystal Bradley 31 July 2010

Heartfelt and understood. Passionate and intense, worded wonderfully. Great poem.

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