Falling Gracefully Comments
The sky is collapsing ahead of me
As we march toward our doom.
These will be the last steps I ever take
As darkness falls amongst us.
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Beautiful images. If this is a first poem it's a brilliant one - I look forward to the next.
Beautiful images. If this is a first poem it's a brilliant one - I look forward to the next.
Wow, this is such an ominous poem Natalie. The vivid descriptions are just so clear. Very powerful poem. Nicely done. I look forward to reading more of your work. Sincerely, Mary
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7/27/2025 2:07:51 PM # 1.0.0
Natalie, good poem with some great lines, especially the first two and' Soon they dance into dust, ” You show great promise and should continue to sharpen and hone your talent. I fully agree with James and Mary; I too look forward to reading more.