he's so sweet
i dont care
he's fun to be around
so that's where you have been
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this is sooo friffin beautiful...i love it! ! its heartfelt and amazing! ! !
your words.. seem to have that heavy.. weighty feel too them... i dont believe... you could have.. squeezed them... for any more if you tried...good write...iip
what a poem! i must say....this kinda piece cant be written unless u r not in true love....! it really shows ur feelings....so true so pure so good......! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
such feelings that surrounds us with such passion to show as this poem does in this one sentence 'he gives me this feeling that's like a wild fire burning across the horizon' Love the poem 10/10
totally amazing poem. hope you did it. a girl, that i knew rather well, told me one day, that she had fellings for me, strong feelings. that one sentence, changed our lives. great poem. steve
its me isnt it my lovely golden angel its me