it's that time when your heart stops
when you don't want it to
when your breathing seems too quick
when you feeling yourself turn red
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Your poem expresses a universal truth indeed. I also really enjoy your others.
I see you've got Stan's attention, that means you're a real gem, I tell you. I love this one especially, because I think we've all been there, in the 'friend zone, ' as many call it.