Monday, February 5, 2007

Falling Fast Comments

Rating: 3.5

Falling fast & dieing faster
Everthing I do or say won't last here
Even if I hide my fear
You will still try to be near
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Kille and Brim (young poets)
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Rajendran Muthiah 21 July 2017

How much sorrow the last two lines carry up? The poet is simply elegant.

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love and death 18 June 2007

u 2 r 1 of da best poets i know. loved it keep it up :) ps. don't lose faith

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Dan Jensen 10 March 2007

Really nice poem. I love the way you write your rhymes. And if I am allowed to do this? *Hug from Dan* Dan J.

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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes 20 February 2007

NICE POEM I LIKED IT KEEP IT COMING

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