Falling fast & dieing faster
Everthing I do or say won't last here
Even if I hide my fear
You will still try to be near
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u 2 r 1 of da best poets i know. loved it keep it up :) ps. don't lose faith
Really nice poem. I love the way you write your rhymes. And if I am allowed to do this? *Hug from Dan* Dan J.
How much sorrow the last two lines carry up? The poet is simply elegant.