A shattered glass like silence now pervades
The secret space; she keeps her dreams concealed.
Uneasy once, the stars now quell and aid
Her doubt. A gaze upon the sky revealed
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I loved this poem with it's beautiful imagery, just perfect! !
Wow! What an amazing poem! Truly amazing! You have talent my friend! ^_^
I really enjoyed reading this poem. The your descriptions create beautiful and inspiring imagery. Your poem flows very easily and well Nice poem: D
Simply Beautiful! ! ! Loved this one Tiffany! Very well penned! Loved your imagery! ! ! Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.
Now this is what I am talking about, it is not the best poem in the world (sorry) , but I like it because this is like something out of a childrens book :) nice job
Hey, I apologize for the late response... Well my dear.. you write with great depth.. difficult for someone of your age... You are an amazing poetess! ! keep up the good work! ! I am sure you'll touch the Stars! ! ! Simply beautiful
It’s very enchanting almost like staring into a dream of a romantic poet who graced this world two centuries ago. You ware your inspiration to your sleeve. Good stuff
Young queen you have awaken in a dream where women are truly a gift...you...my friend said it all...love, romance...a wanted wish...love stinks...but taste so good...with the right mind frame...you have that...and the adventure of roaming love...is wishful...so is santa cluse...very good write for someone so young...but yet... a queen in your owm right...keep your pen close to you...very good...no..outstanding
You really are optimistic and passionate.. Let your dreams take a shape and shine like a star... I loved your writing.
Fascinating, there's nothing I can say to you, you're better than me... :) All the best
Wonderful sonet you have written. A nice theme with nice flow and rhyme. good words with metaphoric use. All the best
I really enjoyed this poem. It has depth and it takes you on a emotional rollar coaster right to the end of the read. Well done, I loved it.
oh! yeah! what a wishing dream, it capture my life the wonder of illusion and imagination.... of which reality is true...a genuine passion of the heart that perfected in the eyes of the beholder...thank you and God bless....10/10
Beautifully it is written and happily it is read. A great poem.