Monday, June 4, 2012

Falling Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.4

A shattered glass like silence now pervades
The secret space; she keeps her dreams concealed.
Uneasy once, the stars now quell and aid
Her doubt. A gaze upon the sky revealed
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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
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Beautifully it is written and happily it is read. A great poem.

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Soumita Sarkar 23 June 2014

A very thought of poem..liked.

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Jayne Davies 23 June 2013

A beautiful write! Well done!

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2013

I loved this poem with it's beautiful imagery, just perfect! !

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Suzaku Vaneko 24 October 2012

Wow! What an amazing poem! Truly amazing! You have talent my friend! ^_^

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Autumn Winds 12 August 2012

I really enjoyed reading this poem. The your descriptions create beautiful and inspiring imagery. Your poem flows very easily and well Nice poem: D

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Kelly Seale 12 August 2012

Simply Beautiful! ! ! Loved this one Tiffany! Very well penned! Loved your imagery! ! ! Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.

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Roland Houston 03 August 2012

Very moving, very emotional

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Prashansa Vaikunthe 15 July 2012

you really composed it very nicely......awesomme..

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Marcella D 12 July 2012

Now this is what I am talking about, it is not the best poem in the world (sorry) , but I like it because this is like something out of a childrens book :) nice job

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Blossom Mist 04 July 2012

Hey, I apologize for the late response... Well my dear.. you write with great depth.. difficult for someone of your age... You are an amazing poetess! ! keep up the good work! ! I am sure you'll touch the Stars! ! ! Simply beautiful

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Kevin Patrick 29 June 2012

It’s very enchanting almost like staring into a dream of a romantic poet who graced this world two centuries ago. You ware your inspiration to your sleeve. Good stuff

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Whisperkwane Lamb 29 June 2012

Young queen you have awaken in a dream where women are truly a gift...you...my friend said it all...love, romance...a wanted wish...love stinks...but taste so good...with the right mind frame...you have that...and the adventure of roaming love...is wishful...so is santa cluse...very good write for someone so young...but yet... a queen in your owm right...keep your pen close to you...very good...no..outstanding

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Jinal Oswal 29 June 2012

You really are optimistic and passionate.. Let your dreams take a shape and shine like a star... I loved your writing.

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Fascinating, there's nothing I can say to you, you're better than me... :) All the best

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Sd Tiwari 28 June 2012

Wonderful sonet you have written. A nice theme with nice flow and rhyme. good words with metaphoric use. All the best

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Thyris Taylor 28 June 2012

I really enjoyed this poem. It has depth and it takes you on a emotional rollar coaster right to the end of the read. Well done, I loved it.

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Antonio Liao 28 June 2012

oh! yeah! what a wishing dream, it capture my life the wonder of illusion and imagination.... of which reality is true...a genuine passion of the heart that perfected in the eyes of the beholder...thank you and God bless....10/10

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Jacques S Mateya 26 June 2012

Good poem beyond description!

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Ency Bearis 25 June 2012

Impressive poem, nice imagery

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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Springfield, MA
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