Falling, Death, Love, Saved Comments

Fall That I'm always Falling i think you want 'un' in stead of 'all'. see what i mean? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - very unique! plunging headlong and then BAM! You Are Stopped.............Cheated perhaps? what could lie ahead? ? ? more of the same? good grief. Let us hope NOT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it is almost a love poem; if it were, i would have to say i don't like it much. but i like it quite a bit, so it must NOT be a love poem! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - SAVED? HMMMMM? my favorite lines? the whole first stanza: Falling Falling Fast Flying Pictures flying Past Too fast Too fast Can not take it all The laughing as I fly Past Laughing as I Fall ............... .......that, by itself, causes me to put this in MyPoemList. thanks for sharing. bri :)