Monday, May 15, 2006

Falling Blossom Comments

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The blossom has fallen on to the old garden wall.
A wall that is crumbling and looks as if it will fall.
The wind blows the apple tree and down come
her petals saying hello to a bed of nettles.
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Sandra Fowler 16 May 2006

Praise for your beautiful, nostalgic poem, Perhaps, God counts the falling blossoms as He counts the sparrows. He created them and they are precious in His sight, Love always, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 15 May 2006

The flow and colour of your words take us to a beautiful place, Love Duncan

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Ernestine Northover 15 May 2006

Lovely, lovely, lovely! A sweet poem, an excellent expression of falling blossom, exactly how it is. Love Ernestine XXX

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