Your standing over there I can hardly see you
You are so far away I want to be with you
I miss you so much I can not breath
Falling Away From Me
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Echoing Mark! I connect to your lines, so therefore it is a poem that works for me! Well done and definitely keep penning away! Welcome to PH also! : -)
Well written, it's hard to describe how we feel emotionally after such a loss.The highs and lows, but you do it justice, keep writing.
When we lose a loved one, part of us also dies, our emotions cannot understand or adjust right away. In time you will heal, but you will never forget.