Falling Asleep Comments
the evening is lying down on my shoulders
a time of warm breaths is coming
magic of the evening under eyelids
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I enjoyed your writing and the effective use of onomatopoeia in the work bravo
The last line is confusing. It should be explaining instead. I thought the rest of it made a lot of sense. Now, with the ending, I am not so sure. I liked the humming part. A very sensual description. GW62
Something how images of words change with different symbols to define the same words.
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7/21/2025 11:14:22 AM # 1.0.0
Nice, miraculously, very vividly. It is a pity that not everyone is reading in Polish. It is worthwhile reading - in every tongue.