Monday, June 15, 2009

Falling Apart Comments

Rating: ★5.0

What do you do when it feels like everything’s falling apart,
When you want to make things right but don’t know where to start.
If your brother didn’t want to live what would you do,
And it feels like your sister’s taking everything out on you.
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Brooke Luchich
pain sister Dad brother
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Taylor Fong 23 June 2009

this is a really good poem. youre a really strong girl. stay tough. (:

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Tracey Wynn 16 June 2009

Good poem, It has strong feeling in it. I give it a 10

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, , , , , , 15 June 2009

i really love the last two lines

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I Am Charlie 15 June 2009

My heart breaks for the falling figure.

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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Darwin, NT
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