Friday, November 25, 2022

Falling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm hungry,
But cant eat
I'm tired,
But can't sleep
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allie russell
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Pratyaksh Bhati 10 December 2022

relatable

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A quite poignant write. Your sadness, or rather that of the poem easily permeates into the heart of the reader. " there's nothing left only the pieces of what once WAS" heartbreaking expression. Top score and added to Myfav.

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David Wood 25 November 2022

Second poem, a good start.5*

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