Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Falling Comments

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Everyday I'm falling

Down, down into empty space
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Lely Atempa
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 July 2018

A superb imaginative poem expressing the morose feel creatively and the greatness of the poem and the quote ought to cheer u up and make u write more such super ones. Kudos. Pleez do add your thoughts/comment on my newest poem too titled, mirage surprise

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

We have the feeling of falling in your poem.++10

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