Monday, April 25, 2016

Falling Comments

Rating: 5.0

fall, lover falling
you are a soft leaving
like the gentle, unnoticed slipping
of lover leaves from autumn branches
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 29 April 2016

Feelings have seasons too. Your poem captures the changing season of love well.

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Barry Middleton 29 April 2016

Yes, love ends but like the seasons it is born again. Generally speaking that is.

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Norah Tunney 25 April 2016

This poem touches like a soft breeze on a summer's day even in its grieving it nurtures. Thanks again Barry

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Barry Middleton 25 April 2016

Thank you Norah. This is another written in the 1970s.

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