Falling Comments

Love is like a bird that takes flight. Love embraces life and takes us ahead with beauty of vision. Autumn leaves spread hopes on grass. A great imagery of Autumn motivates mind. An interesting poem is shared. Revisiting this values more.

Each individual in any short of relationship should have his freedom and space. So it is very, very, important that we do not trample or encroach into it. A very beautiful poem on relationship.

Wow.... Can so feel these incredible words and the amazing comments presented by those who respect you so much. Just do not fall Hazel. x

In a love relationship, what is important is mutual trust and respect! If one holds the rein always with him and rules over the other with an iron hand, the initial warmth can easily slip away to wrath! When two individuals of different tastes and temperaments are made to fuse together, there should be compromises....(sometimes painful) and also the willingness to accept and honour the other with all differences. The fissures and cracks that can possibly arise in a long standing partnership are so poignantly brought out! Indeed a great write Hazel!

Bird is taking flight and love is fluttering. Wise moon is shining with beautiful imagery and calmness of love. Strong presentation of this poem amazes readers. Beautiful one definitely.

A sad tale, Hazel. Devoting your life to another individual can be such a gamble these days. In this poem I see a relationship/marriage that is being controlled. Hope it's not yours. Another fine poem with well chosen words and lines. Well done.

A beautiful poem that captures the struggle and challenges that relationships so often pose.

A lovely poem in Hazel Durham's beautiful style, a simple description, selection of glittering words and the lines flowing like the waves of a river. This is what a reader wants., , , , , , , , , ,10

So beautiful Hazel very nice thank you

Wise moon shines at all time to show calmness. It solves the problems now. Wonderful poem shared really.

Agony in words fallen like the autumn leaves And spreads in mind like the melting snow-