Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Falling Comments

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Reaching out, I fall,
Grabbing,
Missing.
An uncontrolled tumble,
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Justin Chan
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David Wood 22 April 2013

I like your poem but feel so sad that you feel this way. Keep writing poetry and read other good poets and vent your frustration into writing good poems or other forms of writing. The pen is mightier than the sword.

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