Friday, September 25, 2015

Falling Comments

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A lonely cloud hovers over miles of farm
Bird swoops down to pick wriggling a worm
With slow pace girls walk down to the river edge
Where they giggle and play as if on an open stage
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Sanjukta Nag 26 September 2015

Such an enjoyable serene scene of night... with an eye-catching structure of the poem.beauty is dripping. thank you.

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Bharati Nayak 25 September 2015

A beautiful depiction of moonlit night, when a lonely cloud hovers over miles of firm- -, The words fills the heart with soothing feelings.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

Fantastic expression. An amusing poem so nicely depicted and presented. Thanks for sharing. ..... 10

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