Falling Comments

Lovely rhythm and flow as deep as the celestial seas! Great lines of endearment!

A well expressed feeling of admiration, nice words picked, and great write.

Lucky the girl who received this poem. For the words of love it clearly shown. Man with pen, your brillance shone. Fair maiden will know, I pray that's soon. You are clever with words. I really like how you construct such beautifull piece and how you can transfer the emotions from the poem to your readers. I'll continue reading your poems. Smile.. Diane.

wow: D beautifully expressed feelings..hope she knows by now how u feel :) 10+