Sunday, October 4, 2009

(! ! ! !) Falling Comments

Rating: 2.9

...of the clearing
of the trees
a leaf, sustain
the load of sorrow
...
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Alice Cuenca
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Ena N. Mori 27 March 2010

I love the aura of your writing style. Very tactful selection of metaphors! Thank you for commenting on one of my poems!

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Mifael Llauderes 12 October 2009

lt's calming, nevertheless... just paying a visit.

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Antonio Liao 11 October 2009

a hope that holds the clouds.....to reach the destiny that waited for.... thou....in a state of falling it rise to the pendulum to stay.... a courage of the dawning day to come...thank you my friend for sharing this wisdom of waiting and standing to walk again...God bless....a 10 +++++

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Aziz Alkaabi 07 October 2009

Well done, Kandis, i can almost grab that leaf.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

fine image created! nice wording! 10+

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

Really enjoyed this; was sad to reach the end..(smile)

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Ric Bastasa 04 October 2009

puling... ang mata napuling... back to writing candice, superb poem..a ten

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