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...of the clearing
of the trees
a leaf, sustain
the load of sorrow
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a hope that holds the clouds.....to reach the destiny that waited for.... thou....in a state of falling it rise to the pendulum to stay.... a courage of the dawning day to come...thank you my friend for sharing this wisdom of waiting and standing to walk again...God bless....a 10 +++++
puling... ang mata napuling... back to writing candice, superb poem..a ten
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7/26/2025 5:09:24 PM # 1.0.0
I love the aura of your writing style. Very tactful selection of metaphors! Thank you for commenting on one of my poems!