Fallin Out Of Love (C) 2-2-09 Comments

I absolutely love that you allude to your other poems in this piece. It hooks me in and makes me want to know what the others are about. Bravo

Great poem. though the 'sentences' were a bit long for my taste. but all in all wonderful. it makes us all understand what you've been going through. the monologue used really conveys ur emotion.

Make poetry like this and any school who appreciates poetry will want you :) I love the Monolouge and the trick with the other poems :) just beautiful

yooh really kno how ta make a grl squeal i mean lyke yooh touched ma heart and ma soul. I wish i knu tha feelin dat yooh felt, or tha emotions that yooh go thru bt i cnt. but all n all its a wonderful poem

Nice contrast of what is and what isn't. The absence of dialogue was replaced by a monologue.

There are a few mistakes in this but other than that I find it loving and a great piece.

You write with the heart of a mature man, sensitive and ever so endearing.I hope she knows what she had. A 10

poignant write............

touching................................