Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Fallin In Place Comments

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you made me happy
you made me cry
now it is my job to
do whats right
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freda bishop
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Lisa Anderson 12 May 2009

oh my god we write the same sort or peoems... i like this one it remings me of mine comment on my i was forced 2 do it... by the way it is a true story.... thanks

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Darius Fields 08 April 2009

nice work, you have serious skills read mine and see if they inspire you

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Barry A. Lanier 08 April 2009

'Fallin In Place' and you are history....................catharsis with a kick

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 07 April 2009

these people who hurt u will make u strong do not worry my friend. great words amazing poem

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