Monday, November 2, 2009

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Victoria Ayres
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Brandon Owens 06 May 2010

I like the way the poem is organized without any line breaks, it gives the poem the feel of moving fast. You might want to make sure there aren't any mistakes like this one 'newI feel like I can trust you'. Good poem.

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Victoria Ayres

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