Thursday, March 10, 2011

Fallen Tree Comments

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Death is the center of compromised bark.
We see the stark night,
not as beauty sprawled on frozen ground,
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Lamont Palmer (Lamont Palmer)
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Patricia Grantham 09 July 2013

Describing a fallen tree in all of it's entirety. On the other hand using death as a comparison. The two are very similar in composition. Good.

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Adeline Foster 04 August 2012

Liked your use of the doppelgangar of squirrels, and appreciate the deliberation that went into this work. Read mine - Trees - Adeline

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