This sadness creeps on to me
As I sit here all alone
Watching my life fall apart
Loosing the trust and hope
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Started off on diffrnt note And it is allegorical strongly expressive of the envirnmntl malaise Nice...liked
WELCOME! To the Poetry World dear Darlyn! What a way to enter into this wonderful World poetry with this sad but very touching write (Your first) well crafted and poignant! Hope and Faith are the key of a bright future, especially for a young girl like you! Let it all out of your chest through writing since you have the talent! Keep it up! Let's us all hear more from you dear Darlyn! 10+++ God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
Oh! Such anguish, lost and regrets feelings are all but expressed. Thanks for sharing. You may like to rate my poems: The Fallen Tree and Cry My Tears Cry Thanks