Sunday, November 26, 2017

Fallen Still In Muddy Stream Comments

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As evening has come in this city of heart,
Little darkness has covered the way and land,
After rain of November day of low pressure,
Street road has become muddy in dirty water.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 07 October 2020

Middy water gives amazing reflection of light when it comes contact with light. A nice poem full of wisdom you have written!

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Valsa George 18 August 2020

Though the road has become muddy in the night after a rain, with the arrival of the street light, the muddy water is turned into golden color. The bright light also helps passengers and vehicles not to fall into puddles. Light will be sent down from Heaven to help us not to fall down and to find the way! A meaningful poem.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Muddy stream gives nice golden reflection. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Indira Renganathan 27 November 2017

That is the greatness of Light ever to remain pure not getting dirtied...your devout heart has captured the light and the stream in their divine scenario.....great thought....great poem Kumar...thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2017

Rain! ! ! With the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Beautiful poem about a rainy November day.. Well penned

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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