Wednesday, November 19, 2025

Fallen Star Comments

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For time untold I blazed on high
Light 'neath my wings, I brightened thy sky
When thee walked in shadows of night
I shone o'er thee and made the blackness bright
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Timber Koleden
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2025

Liked the third stanza the most. Very touching lines. Many stars for this wonderful poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2025

What a brilliant poem! You have beautifully and profoundly painted the perspective view of a fallen star. Yes, majority of us if not all are fascinated by stars. I liked how you crafted and presented this poem. You applied your great knowledge in poetry and science. A stupendous write!

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Kim Barney 19 November 2025

I am star struck! You have a wonderful imagination.

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Jayne Louise Davies 19 November 2025

Wonderful write Timber x Many thanks for sharing!

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2025

Excellent piece....as always.... thanks a lot....

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

I read this earlier tonight when the stars were still out, and shortly after reading it I actually saw a shooting star! This poem added so much more excitement and brilliance to that brief glimpse I had!

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

What an outstanding and awesome poem, Timber! I absolutely loved reading this! I love the thought you put into this poem and the spirit you gave the star! ! ! This is purely brilliant poetic gold, thank you so much for blessing us all with this poem!

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