For time untold I blazed on high
Light 'neath my wings, I brightened thy sky
When thee walked in shadows of night
I shone o'er thee and made the blackness bright
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What a brilliant poem! You have beautifully and profoundly painted the perspective view of a fallen star. Yes, majority of us if not all are fascinated by stars. I liked how you crafted and presented this poem. You applied your great knowledge in poetry and science. A stupendous write!
I read this earlier tonight when the stars were still out, and shortly after reading it I actually saw a shooting star! This poem added so much more excitement and brilliance to that brief glimpse I had!
What an outstanding and awesome poem, Timber! I absolutely loved reading this! I love the thought you put into this poem and the spirit you gave the star! ! ! This is purely brilliant poetic gold, thank you so much for blessing us all with this poem!
Liked the third stanza the most. Very touching lines. Many stars for this wonderful poem!