In the long hard battle that never seems to end
I watched each of them fall
Soldiers
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It's extremely difficult to choose between Memories, Broken Silence, and An Almost Broken Glass Bottle but THIS is definitely my favorite by you. Probably because it's morbid- what can I say, sadness moves me. The saddest words are often the most true. Trust me, you're not the only one who mourns and tombs aren't always sealed indefinitely. I've seen both sides of the issue. Excellent write- thanks for sharing.
Wow Madame M. Beautiful job! this is one of those poems that moves you the same way every time you read it, be it often or not. I can feel how heartfelt this is for you. Excellent Job! ! ! !
Miss M! This poem is so heart-wrenching that I almost teared up. We all have fallen soldiers in our lives I think and it made me think of some of mine. Really excellent job-can't even express how much this moved me.
Although many have fallen, although many have died... their deaths are not in Vain... For they gave the Ultimate, they gave their All... For each and everyone of US... It was Their Duty... It was Their Call. Madame Mickey, This is so very touching, so very real... I know what Sacrifices are needed for US to be Free. Outstanding Write! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.