Saturday, July 18, 2009

Fallen Soldier Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know Im suppose to move on with the future
But Im stuck in the past
I cant help but reminisce bout the times we had
I know you watching me
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Marquel Walker
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 30 July 2009

Please correct your spelling errors so I can give you a 10.

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Obinna Eruchie 22 July 2009

Gone, but remains in your heart to be part of you. A touching piece.

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sad thoughts, well said

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Marieta Maglas 18 July 2009

Wonderful realistic poem...we must always try to find a solution for everything.The solution is there, waiting to be seen.We can lose someone, but we will never lose the idea of love and all we have to do for our existence and a real brave soldier will overpass everything.10+++ from me.you are a great poet..keep writing

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Marquel Walker

Marquel Walker

Bronx, NY
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