some pieces of fallen leaves of last year
turned very silky like cicada's wings
kept well in a book
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the association of leaf and wing, the fallen leaves, emotional depths, the scene of a woman collecting leaves they are all richly poetic. very nice poem dear poetess.
the one who loves to collect the fallen leaves must have been caught in the nostalgic feeling Nice lines comparing the 'cicada's wings! ! Thank you Poet! !
Carpet The Ground With Rustle Whispering Warmth listen to the fallen leaves wind whisper rustle warm dry blankets of colour flame leaves rustle carpet the ground with rustle whispering warmth Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Fallen Leaves' by the poet Cigeng Zhang. Dedicated to the poet Cigeng Zhang.
listen to the fallen leaves rustle, warm dry blankets of leaves rustle, capet the ground with whispering warmth
nice perception.. down to earth, how simple things can memorize and give the nostalgia! ....explains too, how so cinnrcted eith simple things of nature! ! ! .......thanks for sharing! !
Really wonderful poem, fallen leaves are unique pieces of art.
Really Unnie how do you write such poems? I love it. Just advise me how to write such poems. Cuz I'm new. :)
Lovely comment, Sareena.Thank you.Keep imagination.Keep on reading and writing!
I see artwork here. Thanks for sharing, and I enjoyed it.
I love that second line image of the book - pressed leaf becoming as delicate as a cicada's wing. Just the association of leaf and wing is richly poetic to me. When a poet discovers and shares such a complex and unexpected image, I am alert for more such poetic treasures from her! I like your concluding stanza in which you suggest emotional depths in the woman collecting the leaves. The deeper subject of nostalgia is only suggested because you don't know anymore about than we readers do. But just knowing there is this woman of such emotional range is satisfying. We won't intrude on her privacy, just admire it from a distance.
What a delicate comment! Fallen leaves have their value in the poets' eyes.Thank you Daniel.
Leaves carry memories of their lifetime Waiting for another birth To be back on their mother tree.. Happy to know that you understood nature in the best way