Fallen Leaves Comments

i'd use bear instead of bare. thanks for sharing. bri :)

Hope is the dream of fallen leaves. This line resonates in my mind, it is a truth of life. When we too fall into guilt, our hope is that we will be forgiven. If we continue to sin, throughout our lives, the only God we know, will not be seen for we will have replaced Him with the devil. Such an intense poem, hits your mind like an arrow hitting a bull's eye! Fantastic message! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn