Fallen Leaf Comments

The finest extended metaphor poem in recent times. Brilliant verse, Nosheen!

'Even a leaf will get tired'. Strength or swiftness will not stop a man from falling or becoming absent in the present. Wonderful poem.

What of man? Even man will fall one day. Nicely written.

How long will it roam? How long will it go? The answers to these questions are limited dear poetess. I love this poem. My pleasure revisiting this outstanding poem.

Top score and to my favourite dear friend

A fallen and dried leaf could not have been portrayed more beautifully and emotionally. Outstanding poem dear Nosheen!

I love the metaphor. What you express at the end is the undeniable truth. An outstanding poem. Keep it up. All the best.

Men never get tired of wandering and wavering... : )

What of man? ..... why men alone?

Fallen leaf has such a description....nicely penned lines

Extraordinary poem. That magically makes us feel the helplessness of man in a way so vividly and soulfully presented.

This was a top 5 poem. I meant to give you five stars