Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Fallen Leaf Comments

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Fallen leaf is strolling on the street
being run over by cars one after another
being trampled by pedestrians frequently
still lying on the street in the lonely world
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ramesh rai
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Hazel Durham 08 May 2015

Superb write, the fallen leaf is a symbol of the forgotten people who fall by the wayside because of poverty, mental health issues or just bad luck. A sad reality in a world that turns it's back on failure!

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Valsa George 29 July 2013

The fallen leaf is no more cherished by anybody, but cruelly trampled over by every one and blown in the wind like dust and finally merges with dust! This is the plight of humans too! The world retains only those who are wanted; the rest are neglected! A great write, poignant and meaningful! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2013

Nice episode of a fallen leaf. Beautifully presented. Please read my poem 'A Lonely Fallen Leaf' when you have time.

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