Monday, June 22, 2009

Fallen... In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

its the thing of beauty that Keats talked about
but i speak of the living one
who brought me from darkness
from fear, from pain to the everwarming strong bright sun
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Alen Alexander
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dr veenaa rai 01 August 2009

falling in love is a sweet feeling, very well described...10+

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Marieta Maglas 25 July 2009

wonderful lyric poem, beautiful words of love.10

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Rosalita Fernandez 27 June 2009

lovely poem, well written

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beautiful and true poem about the sweet embrace of the love's face..

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Ted M 24 June 2009

Nicely written, pure & simple, blended with the strong emotions.

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DaNa XxX 23 June 2009

i liked it..! ! it was sweet, nice and beautiful..! ! ! ! ^_^..keep on writtin! yours, DaNa...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 June 2009

The ultimate dream.......to fall in love with someone you really love.Nice writes Alen.

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Lady Grace 22 June 2009

nice composition..beautiful...grace

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

'you had me fallen, only for one certain thing you made me fall... in love the love that made rise though rise high all time, but i dont know how' emotions well expressed friend, , touching, ...nice poem indeed! ! ! ! ! regards

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Thomas Coltrin 22 June 2009

i loved it was beautiful.........good job keep writing

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Eyan Desir 22 June 2009

Nice write Alex very sweet keep it up 10s from the love doctor

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