Thursday, January 1, 2009

Fallen Hero Comments

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I once saved these people from all of those who
would do them harm. It has been years since that day
I told them no more would I be their protector that it
was my final deed for them. Since then I have become
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Jacob Courtney
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Fiona Davidson 15 January 2009

This is such a strong write Jacob....enjoyed reading it...thank you... Fi

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Ted L Glines 08 January 2009

I feel a depth in this that goes much beyond simple human heros. Considering what we have done with His advice, this may well be the postscript of Jesus. It seems we have exploded His message into so many self-serving ideologies that naught is left but greed. Regardless of your intent, this is a great poem, Jacob: -) Ted

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