Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Fallen Flower Comments

Rating: 3.5

Lying there untouched,
Unseen forever.
Leaving back its value,
Its sanctity, its chastity.
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Khaleelulla syed.A
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Eric Cockrell 21 June 2011

all of life is but a rose petal fallen, dissolving back into the nameless, bringing forth life again... like this poem very much!

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Bancroft Boreland 20 June 2011

i feel pity for this fallen flower. its like its a person.

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Pamuditha Zen Anjana 02 June 2011

Loved this part specially! ! ! 'Stamped, rubbed, Dragged by everyone. Yet, no whisper, No cry nothing' Nice use of rhymes and imagery! ! ! ! Love it! ! !

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Craig Mize 01 June 2011

All that I can say bout that poem is 'beautiful'

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Great poem Khalilullah. It was rich in imagery and style. Very deep indeed. Thanks for sharing.....

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