Fallen Flower.. Comments

fallen flower... ah! butterfly...... written by basho

bold theme and bold poem.beautifull and crisp.posted 10 for u surya

good piece, Sumayya...you articulate very well your thoughts about the untouched withering flower...about the insatiated withering desires of life...10

A lovely and wonderful poem. Love it.10+

beautiful piece, sumayya...i admire the imaginative mind behind this write...10

yet all that happens to happen by metamorphosis that very beautry of nature when crucified by own reeks of cruelty............yet ingenious by the wexpression, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

A budding flower, not a fallen flower. A very sweet piece.

lovely words Sumayya As Suma means flower, be careful!