Saturday, April 22, 2006

Fallen City Comments

Rating: 4.5

The dawn of fall has arrived within a golden essence.
The city has crumbled beneath the twilight sky.
The water reflects the odd beauty perserving its lingering prescence.
Across the lake a lone pine stands on a hill, swaying in the whispering voices of the gripping chill. Wind.
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Chantelle Clark
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Kimberly Kastner 22 April 2006

Wow! So beautiful-especially the part about the pine tree. Great job! !

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