Tuesday, June 20, 2006

Fallen Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amber eyes, glowing softly,
Form and face of quiet frailty
Voice of once such golden timbre,
Worn away to just a whisper
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Terry Manns
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Daniel Tyler 20 June 2006

This is absoluely beautiful, Terry. As frail and ethereal as the subject. I did my own 'fallen' poem called Francesca if you want a look but I think it pales in comparison!

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