Tuesday, August 14, 2007

'Fallen Angels' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fallen angels
Broken wings,
Heartaches and sorrows too soon it brings
Lots of unforgivable things.
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Brian Mills 04 October 2007

wow...lots of pain and sorrow i feel in this write Poison......very deep.....enjoy'd tons though.....you write so well where everything just 'flows'......excellent write! ! ! thnx my friend for sharing! ! ! ! Brian

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Melvina Germain 05 September 2007

Oh how true your words are, some of us lose our way and have difficulty coming back. There truly is hope for a bright future though, we don't have to die too soon, just look toward the moon, beyond the stars, call out His name, praise Him, ask Jesus to come into your life and He will be there. The darkness will fade and light will come trickling through until the days become bright with blessings from the Lord. It's very simple really, all one has to do is 'Believe'--Excellent poem. --Melvina--

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Stacey-leigh Olner 04 September 2007

thats lovely. i like angels and was looking 4 a angel poem 4 my friend because he likes angels aswell, and i cant find 1 or think of one.

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