Fallen Angel Comments

A poem of self-pity. Lacks depth and poetic quality

Beautiful in true sense. Full score.

Heart touching poem.thanks for sharing

An angel imploring to gain her life for the second time in order to rectify the mistakes she had made before. So exciting. Thanks for sharing!

Awesome thanks for sharing 10+

Awesome

the fallen Angel came and knew the everything with insightful heart

An angel who has fallen from sky and established on ground with dignity is an amazing angel.This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before. She is very right in action and attitudes. This poem is brilliantly penned.10

Interesting to the ears and well structured, powerful dictions. You've done a great job, cheers.

We have stories in our mythologies about angels pushed out from the heaven for mistakes. Be cautious not to commit any mistake ahead. To apologise is divine. Read my poems please. Thanks

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Very beautiful words of fallen angel. Good poem.

Hi Jennifer, A second chance in life! And the resolve that one won't make the same mistakes she made before: : Would help her in that endeavour. Lovely poem. After a catastrophe, that is what we should work on. And

I am here for reason, That reason is to have a second chance in life, That life I was given for a reason, They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, a very fine poem dear poetess. thank you very much. tony

Beautifully written.Please check out my poems Daddy, Just To Let You Know and How many times.

beautiful piece, Jennifer, your poem strikes thoughts

Ah! Fallen angel lives. Nice poet

A nice depicted ballad of self. Have it with same feelings.thank you

I have fallen from sky, Fallen to the ground, I am the angel of sadness, Angel of lost hopes, Angel of lost dreams, I am the fallen angel, Fear me not, I am here for reason, That reason is to have a second chance in life, That life I was given for a reason, They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her, This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10++++y

I am here for reason, That reason is to have a second chance in life, That life I was given for a reason, They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, A beautiful poem, fallen angel. Thanks poet.