Thursday, July 23, 2009

Fallen Angel Comments

Rating: 4.9

You fell out of the sky and into my arms
I'm telling you this and my words are true
I'll do my best to take care of you
Your my fallen angel and I'll never do you harm
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Kevin Fisher
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Kristina B; Williams 03 August 2009

i gave you and the poem a 10++++ also added it to my favorite list..please take a moment 2 grade my newest 3...intwertwined souls, on page 1.intertwined souls ending, page 2, and stand still, which is a wacky poem, on page 3 i believe..

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Deborah Cromer 23 July 2009

Sweet! Writing about being torn in two directions, makes for good thought. You would love to keep your fallen angel, but knowing you need to return your love to where it belongs. Lots to weigh and consider, a heavy decision to have to make. Thanks for the invite to read your work! Deborah Cromer

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