Monday, March 23, 2009

Fallen Angel Comments

Rating: 3.5

The isolation, The coldness
taking back the love I could never claim
a touch, the warmth I could never feel
a moment that is sorrow
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Kami Henson
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Jack Price 25 March 2009

I enjoy your poem. I would like to see you write a poem or two about happiness; you have nice flow with your writing.

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Hazem Al Jaber 24 March 2009

don`t be in this pessimistic.. be sure that there always a one cares about you.. a one who wil lights your darkest night to give you all what you feel in.. beautiful penned.. hazem al..

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