Friday, January 13, 2012

Fallen Angel Comments

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laying fallen, alone hungry for love,
abandoned lost, the life i lived gave in under my feet
the feeling of fear sourounds me
darknes falls
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alyssa carrigan
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Craig Moon 25 January 2012

Wow, your poems are so sad, But I know what its like to be hurt like that, so I right positive things in hopes of maybe someday finding and Angel. So here's one I wrote a while back which I hope you might like, , , , , Essence of our being is our souls, A light that can shines outwards from within. But unfortunately many people of this world have ignored there very own existence by letting there souls fall asleep within there own bodies. for they have been hurt, neglected, lied to, and alone for to long. But do not worry, for you can let your soul shine again, as you seek out across the vast of oceans of life other souls who wish to join there lights together so they will shine so brightly they can be seen all the way into heaven!

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Anhelica Velasquez 13 January 2012

trumendess! its amazing. it practically jumps of the page! ! ! (so to speak) i love it! nice.

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 January 2012

A heart touching love letter this is! The sweetest song tells of saddest thought.There is a rain pouring of emotions. Hats off!

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Redneck 3 13 January 2012

i like this one alot joe dirt this one is amazing i love you!

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