Had gone too far out in the wilderness,
Just to get lost on my way back home.
Running breathless, facing the darkness alone,
In search of a life, I dug up my own doom.
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I wanted to run away from him, But always ended up in him arms, All my roads met his paths, All my escapes guarded by his charms. Imaginative, as if the devil caught me, he was around. Thank you.
Hi Rehnuma, A profound expression of desire and of course, repentance... The rhyme, the words... Loved reading....
Very compelling and poignant poem. Submitting to our desires and passions even when our soul is dammned....it's a naked submission of our fallibility expressed with such a wonderful flow and rhythm. Liked your poems.
Finely coated words of agony through an worth reading verse. congrats wife
thank you hubby. but your poems are much superior than me. i love your poems.
Good verse. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
A beautiful rhetorical poem - great lines. Work of an active imagination, well conceived and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Rehnuma.