Sunday, April 30, 2017

Fallen Angel Comments

Rating: 4.9

Had gone too far out in the wilderness,
Just to get lost on my way back home.
Running breathless, facing the darkness alone,
In search of a life, I dug up my own doom.
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Rehnuma Tarannum
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Chinedu Dike 07 February 2018

A beautiful rhetorical poem - great lines. Work of an active imagination, well conceived and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Rehnuma.

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Shimizu Mizuhala 30 June 2017

I wanted to run away from him, But always ended up in him arms, All my roads met his paths, All my escapes guarded by his charms. Imaginative, as if the devil caught me, he was around. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2017

Hi Rehnuma, A profound expression of desire and of course, repentance... The rhyme, the words... Loved reading....

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Savita Tyagi 02 June 2017

Very compelling and poignant poem. Submitting to our desires and passions even when our soul is dammned....it's a naked submission of our fallibility expressed with such a wonderful flow and rhythm. Liked your poems.

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Hasan Maruf 01 May 2017

Finely coated words of agony through an worth reading verse. congrats wife

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Rehnuma Tarannum 01 May 2017

thank you hubby. but your poems are much superior than me. i love your poems.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 April 2017

Good verse. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rehnuma Tarannum 01 May 2017

Thanks for your support.

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Dr. Yahya 30 April 2017

Very painful indeed. Thank you for it.

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Rehnuma Tarannum 01 May 2017

Thanks for liking it. :)

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