Saturday, May 26, 2012

Fallen Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've fallen down
this deep dark well
and I can't get out
I call for help
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(De Va) 29 October 2012

sometimes the responses come from unusual places....listen deep in the night and hear the souls that come to stand at your side as you suffer the pangs of the lonely and sad... great write. I gave it a 10....

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Christian Rivera 27 May 2012

The poem is excellent. I can relate to the loneliness and calls for help with no response.

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Shihabudheen K J 27 May 2012

Feels like a weird dream caught in a dead well.you r not alone, cheers, fly free off the well.

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