Friday, May 4, 2012

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I'm digging a hole
Deep and fast,
I cannot reach the top
As I sit on the ledge my legs dangle over the edge
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darkness reigns
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Captain Cur 06 May 2012

Good poem, bad ending. Forget em'. My sails were never full enough to catch the ones I thought I loved. But full enough to catch the one I love.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 May 2012

passionately curved with imagery and metaphor yet with beauty to behold, thanks for sharing

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