Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Fallen Comments

Rating: 4.5

Swimming in the sea of tears,
since from heaven a fell.
Feeling nor sorrow or fear.
Sinking to the depths of hell.
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Joshua Ruiz Melendez
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Anthony Han 08 June 2009

Intresting choice of words, could use some more work to make it aWesome lolz

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Yll L 03 June 2009

i love every words of this poem...

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Joshua Ruiz Melendez

Joshua Ruiz Melendez

San Juan, Puerto Rico
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