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That is a beautiful poem.

i like it.it's very beautiful and honest poem; well done

Beautifully written, and very strong words that grip the imagination, I LOVE IT!

An admonition to stand up and be counted.A poem with substance and shape befitting the high minded theme. A lovely prayer as well.10.

the physical and the metaphysical, the natural and the supernatural, the being and the supreme being, the relative and the absolute, , all, , would have got no difference with the light and shadow couple, since every single can not be detected without the other single, it's scientific in sense, and great in content, the meaning sometimes could be the one who dominates the situation, i think that's exactly what was to do with your wise writing in this impressive piece of writing, , yours ///a\\\k///ph.d...

Hi VIVEK, It's a very powerful poem and also a prayer to The Almighty.. Well written.

Very powerful poem that makes you think. Great job. May i invite you to read my poem Called, oh my love.

This poem was beautifully written....well done :)

It just don't get any more powerful than this and without a doubt so many of us discover the deeper truths of life if we are lucky, at different junctures of our lives. Thank you for putting it in front of all of our eyes................Jim Troy

Very well written poignant verses with the presence of mind...i liked it

Is it not the wish of all, to be the good one, the angel that still has wings? Interesting writing, thanks for the invite.